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Medium Poetry
50-200 words. Can be any form, though I am best at free verse. Please be descriptive and precise with your request.

caughtwhen I was younger
I used to chase boys
across the schoolyard
and carve their names into
the darkest depths of
my makeshift diaries;
I thought they were my
best kept secrets,
so carefully
tucked away under the
corners of my mattress
(or so I thought until my mother
asked we exactly who
jonathan was and why
my tongue tripped
over his name.)
as I entered
my rip and pungent
teenage years full of angst
and peer pressure
I found myself falling
or rather flailing
madly into love,
which the first one is
always the messiest
because we’re still not
quite sure what love is
except that it makes your
chest feel tight and
sitting in class next to your now
best-friend-turned-crush
extremely hard--
needless to say he was
neither the first nor last
boy to play with my heartstrings.
but now as I sit on the edge
of adulthood my feet dangling
precariously off its ledge,
the names and faces that
used to line the margins
of my notebooks
have faded to fond memories
and I’ve found myself
travelin
if I could go back in timeit all started with a hello that
came fl-fl-flittering from
my quivering, adolescent lips
and then we
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            l
              e
                 d
into a hypersonic
oblivion were me melted together
in a symphonic mix
of words and the distilled
inks of dead poets.
we g r e w and glowed
and slowly we (I)
fell deeper into
uncharted waters that
made my bones grow cold
and my heart
drown with antic-
-pation.
when you offered to
show me the very galaxies that
swirled in my faltering irises,
when you splayed
your fingers against
my spine and urged me
toward the dancing
constellations
with your soft willow-whispers
against my foolish ears
I…
I…
I…
panicked
scared, I dashed away
like a frightened
lamb in the eyes
of God,
leaving your arms
empty and
quaking
while my heart
screamed bloody
murder from within
my rusted prison
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Long Poetry or Short Story
Poems will be between 200 and 500 words. Can be any form, though I am best at free verse. Please be descriptive and precise with your request.

xcix. pushing up daisiesWe were laying on your bedroom floor
a nearly empty bottle of cheap wine was sitting
beside us as we barely watched some dramatic sitcom
play on the TV; your head was nestled against my shoulder
and your hand was tracing circles down my arm
as you drunkly rambled about you&me.
he loved me.
You threw your arms in the air with a
frustrated ‘tut’ as I stood there arms crossed
and waiting; all I wanted was an apology but you
stubbornly couldn't see past your ego until
you let your words slip and then the tears started
slipping down my face as my hand slipped from the crook
of my elbow and we both went to bed bruised--
the mark I left on your cheek was just as red as my still crying eyes.
he loved me not
It started with an exchange of 'hello, how are you?'
but turned into a last minute movie night at my place
where we talked more than we actually watched the movie,
which turned into me sitting in your lap,
your lips ghosting towards mine as my heart
nearly lea
verbatimthey say opposites attract and I guess they’re right
because I was attracted to you since the day we met
with those wild green eyes and your alluring words that made
me feel more comfortable in my own skin than
I have ever I felt in twenty years of existence,
you were a foreign taste to me that I began to crave
so insatiably that my angel became my devil’s advocate
and suddenly troubled waters turned into stormy seas
and all I remember are
the long days and hard nights
that were clouded with loud voices and
screaming
lots and lots of screaming
and tears so many tears
that i’m surprised i had
any to spare
but in the cacophony  
of clashing words and late night movie dates
we sparked
we ignited
we burned
you were the fire to my gasoline and it became
impossible to wash your ashes from my skin
you were painted on me;
it was our own Mona Lisa except she was frowning,
frowning because one of your hands was around my waist
and the other was pointed towards the sky
you


Short Stories will be roughly 500 words or less, depending upon how invested I become in the story. Extra words are free of charge if I get a little carried away.

Underneath the StarsShe stood there at the window, silently watching the storm that raged outside. The large droplets of rain splashed against the hard ground as rumbles of thunder echoed through the air. A flash of lighting popped in the distance giving the scene a pale violet glow. She watched as the careless winds pulled at the trees, bending them back and forth, threatening to break their limbs.
She pursed her lips and thought about the irony of the situation. It was if the storm that pursued outside the glass was the same one stirring in her heart. She felt as if she was the one being thrashed about, being bent back and forth, threatening to break apart.
But she knew there wasn’t anything she could do, except let the storm pass.
She sighed. I wonder what he’s doing?
 
He sat there at his desk, eyes blindly skimming over the pages of work that were scattered about. A textbook stood open at the end of the one desk, passage after passage running along its pag
Doodle/ Small Artwork
Small (5"x5") sample of work. Can be of any subject except NSFW content. Can be in medium (charcoal, watercolor, pencil etc.) Can be adapted digitally for +10 pts. If you wish to have the piece physically we can arrange that personally over note, though it will cost a little extra.

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Jade
Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
United States

20 | virgo | hopeless romantic of some type | aspiring biomedical engineer
rotting poet | music addict | avid doodler | amateur (crochet) hooker



"You should not have to rip yourself into pieces to keep others whole."
- Emma Bleker


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Hi. I'm Jade/Crystal/CJ/crystallized-skies/Skies and I try to art. I like words and pretty things. I have an affinity for messy things like paint and relationships. I spend 95% of my time on the internet because the real world sucks sometimes.

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  • Mood: Relief
  • Listening to: whatever my roommate's listening to
  • Reading: Biochem textbook
  • Watching: Next Food Network Star
  • Playing: just dance 4
  • Eating: desert
  • Drinking: water
I stole these from DalekCaanII because I'm done with all my work and they looked fun. let's go. 

i) Would you rather live one life that lasts 1,000 years or live 10 lives that last 100 years each?
10 lives that last 100 years each because then I could live each one differently and experience so many more things
 
ii) Would you rather use eye drops made of vinegar or toilet paper made from sandpaper?
sandpaper. 

iii) Would you rather be without elbows or be without knees?
knees. I could still get around if though awkwardly. Not having elbows would blow. 

iv) Would you rather experience a sharp pain in your side each time someone says your name or have a bell sound each time you are aroused?
Sharp pain. People don't say my name that much and a bell would be pretty awkward in certain situations

v) Would you rather have a large 10 inch long belly button that swayed to music or have accordions for legs?
10 in belly button. I never wear crop tops so no one would see it moving. 

vi. Would you rather have to sneeze but not be able to or have something stuck in your eye for an entire year?
Not be able to sneeze. Having something in your eye is unbearable. 

vii. Would you rather have a dragon or be a dragon?
Have a pet dragon. Then you have the best of both worlds. 

viii) Would you rather secretly have sex with a goat or have everyone think you had sex with a goat even though you didn’t?
.....
....
first one

ix. Would you rather have hair nowhere on your body or be very hairy all over and not be able to shave?
first one hands down. I already practically live the hairy life (except I do get to shave) and it's not fun. 

x. Would you rather never be able to speak again or always have to say everything that is on your mind?
Never speak again. My thoughts are weird. 
 
xi. Would you rather be able to read or be able to read minds (but be illiterate)?
Read. I don't wanna know what other people are thinking. I already have to deal with my own thoughts, I don't wanna deal with everybody else's. 

xii. Would you rather be able to speak fluently every language in the world or be the best in the world at something of your choosing?
Fluent. That's be handy af. 

xiii. Would you rather be in prison for five years in solitary confinement or not ever go to prison and not ever become rich?
Second one hands down. Solitary confinement for five years would be rough. 

xiv. Would you rather wear a snow suit in the desert or be naked in Antarctica?
Snow suit. They didn't say if I couldn't take it off later. ;) 

xv. Would you rather change the past or be able to see into the future?
change the past. I don't wanna know what's ahead of me. 

xvi. Would you rather have one sex partner or multiple sex partners?
why is this even a question? 

xvii. Would you rather swallow or spit?
spit. 

xviii. Would you rather be on the bottom or on top?
bottom. I don't wanna be doing all the work. xD

xix. Would you prefer to have someone watching you have sex or watch someone having sex?
oh god. um. watch someone have sex. too self conscious for the first one. 

xx. Would you rather have sex in the morning or at night?
virgin over here but um night. I'm not a morning person. 

xxi. Would you rather bring another person in bed with us or cheat on me?
threesome it is. 
  
xxii. Would you rather have sex with the lights off or with the lights on?
off. it's more ~romantic~ that way. 

xxiii. Would you rather receive oral sex or give it?
um neither? not about that life. 

xxiv. Would you rather have romantic sex or try out some new kinky sex ideas?
por que no los dos?

xxv. Would you rather end a first date with sex or with a passionate kiss?
passionate kiss. We ain't jumping to fourth base. 

xxvi. Would you rather wear a pushup bra all day long, every day or stiletto heels all day long, every day?
push up bra. how is this even a question. Stilettos are feet killers. 
  
xxvii. Would you rather be told to stop being so sensitive every day or be asked if you are PMSing every day?
PMSing. But I'd probably end up punching somebody in the face either way. 

xxviii. Would you rather get a rash from a poor bikini wax job or have an entire eyebrow accidentally waxed off?
rash. I'd look hella weird with one eyebrow. 
  
xxix. Would you rather go through a whole day with a very visible panty line or with lipstick on your teeth?
visible panty line. who cares about that anyway? 

xxx. Would you rather have your gynecologist use a speculum that is too large or a speculum that is cold?
cold. It /technically/ wouldn't be painful. 

xxxi. Would you rather go through a whole day with your bra’s underwire poking you or have a very bad hair day?
very bad hair day. underwire poking you in the boob is painful shit. 

xxxii. Would you rather be able to choose your bridesmaid dress or never have to be a bridesmaid again?
uh this is obvious. first one. 

xxxiii. Would you never have painful cramps again or never have to shave again?
never shave again. pop some ibuprofen and you're good. 

xxxiv. Would you rather be treated like a human being or be catcalled?
i refuse to answer this idiotic question. 

xxxv. Would you rather get your period on a date or at the beach?
date. I've had it at the beach and it SUCKED. 
  
xxxvi. Would you rather email an embarrassing email to your entire company or eat an entire stick of butter?
probs butter. 

xxxvii. Would you rather never laugh again or never use your smartphone again?
smartphone. laughing makes you live longer. 

xxxviii. Would you rather lose $1000 or lose all of your phone contacts?
all my phone contacts. they be backed up on my computer. :3 

xxxix. Would you rather be stung by a jellyfish or give up Facebook for a week?
FB. Jellyfish are deadly and it didn't specify that in the question. 

xl. Would you rather eat the same meal for the rest of your life or never use Instagram again?
never use instagram again. I don't even have one. 

xli. Would you rather give up alcohol for a year or give up your smartphone for a month?
alcohol. don't drink so....

xlii. Would you rather never have coffee again or live without TV forever?
I'd be fine either way but let's go coffee. 

xliii. Would you rather feel like you were hung over for a week or not use email for a week?
email. I wouldn't have to worry about spam for a week. 
   
xliv. Would you rather win a trip to Hawaii or win a free laptop?
Hawaii. 
   
xlv. Would you rather give up shopping for six months or give up emoji for six months?
emojis. they be fun but not worth shopping. 

xlvi. Would you rather have cookies or have French fries?
french fries tbh. sorry chell. I'm a spud girl. 
   
xlvii. Would you rather be good at sports or get good grades?
already good at grades so let's keep it that way. 

xlviii. Would you rather help clean up after dinner or help set the table before dinner?
set the table. I hate cleaning dishes. 
  
xlix. Would you rather get up early or stay up late?
you're talking to internet people. stay up late. 
 
l. Would you rather be super fast or super strong?
fast. I could run places w/o breaking a sweat. 
 
li. Would you rather be invisible or have the ability to fly?
invisible. it'd be so convenient and I wouldn't be flagged by the FAA.  
 
lii. Would you rather be the smartest kid in school or the most popular kid in school?
smart. who wants popularity these days>

liii. Would you rather eat your boogers or lick your shoe?
shoe. they practically brand new. 

liv. Would you rather have bad breath or smelly feet?
smelly feet. I mean really neither but I mean at least you could cover feet with socks. 

lv. Would you rather be a police officer or be a firefighter?
I would say police officer but in this day and age...

whew. that was fun and now you probably know more than you care to know about me. :3

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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2015

Hey! :rose:


I wanted to drop by personally to say thanks for joining TheWritePlace! I’m excited that people seem enthusiastic about it :giggle: If you wanna know more about our group check out Our Rules (there aren’t many and they’re all mostly common sense to me!) or just ask! If you fancy getting more involved we do have positions open which you can find out about here. For now I hope you enjoy the group and find it helpful. If you have ideas on how to make it more useful, suggestions, feedback, anything, just let us know - and when our chatroom #TheWriteRoom officially launches (soon) I hope to see you in there too :love:

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made-of-awesomeness Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the llama!!!
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Thank you for the llama! :)
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thank you so much for the watch lovely :heart:
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jade-pandora Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015
Thank-you-very-much by KmyGraphic
For faving my poem "Voices" 
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