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evergreen dreams

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a frosty chill nips
at our noses as we
weave our way through
the falling snow,
the smile on your
rosy lips lighting the
dreary winter landscape
in a merry glow.

As your gloved hands hold me
tight against your chest
and your chin finds its place
upon my shoulder,
the towering evergreens
around us sigh;
their breath enveloping us in
a peaceful calm that
settles in my bones.

the silent night around us
sings as we stand together
in perfect harmony
marveling at the
winter wonderland before us;
these ancient laurels watch
as an all too familiar
magic unfolds—
a new love blossoming
amidst winter’s
heavy arms.
For Full-of-Lit's Winter Holiday Contest and Bright-Poets' Christmas Contest. The theme for this poem was inspired by the classic Christmas scent of pine. I really wanted to make this a whimsical but nostalgic piece because this is one of my favorite scents and I wanted this to represent how this smell makes me feel. 

Hope you enjoy! 

Critiques welcome!  
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snowveins's avatar
this is beautiful!! i loved the imagery and the contrast between warmth and cold. :heart: